This is a grownups’ love song.
Not for the faint of heart are love and its vagaries. Especially during the time of great desire and burning jealousy.
Musically, this is a melody that I have been playing around with for a couple of years. But the story, and therefore the lyrics, was elusive.
Some songs exist independently. And find their songwriter by means that remain one of the great mysteries of art. I was sitting at the right place, at the right time, strumming this melody when the story of a double-edged breakup came along.
Not often does a song have room or time to include two sets of relationships being dissolved.
But I like that there is not only a sweetness to the confession of the affair but an acknowledgement of the pain it caused.
The sharp edge of love and its aftermath is also revealed in the quote from William Congreve: “Heaven has no rage like love turned to hate.” (Which is the front end of a more famous quote often misattributed to Shakespeare: “…Nor hell a fury like a woman scorned.”).
I’ve been pleased with the reaction when playing this song live on a couple of occasions, as well as Melissa’s opinion – if you were wondering why it leads off this series of Demos.
The demo above is just me and my guitar.
When You Kissed Me
I see you’re leaving by the clothes you’re wearing
And the bags you packed by the door.
I’d beg you to stay but I’ve learned the hard way
That our love’s a double-edged sword
We sat under a moon ‘til the sky turned blue
Knowing exactly where it would lead us
There was nothing I’d rather do except what we shouldn’t do
And then we’d both be defenseless
And then you kissed me
And then you kissed me
We thought we knew it all and we’d be absolved
From breaking the hearts of our lovers
But “heaven knows (has) no rage like love turned to hate”
And they burned all our bridges
Just like a summer storm, trouble seems to comes along
When you are out in the open
And we were running wild with nowhere to hide
And it ended all so sudden
And we blamed each other
With word that kill just like murder
so as you say goodbye, i swear I’m going to try
to remember only the good times
like when you made me blush and we were making love
and you said close your eyes…
And then you kissed me
And then you kissed me
so as you say goodbye, i swear I’m going to try
to remember only the good times
like when you kissed me
like when you kissed me
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Love, love, love this song! I’m one of those with the blank stare.
so glad you do.
Nice job Thomas..Keep em comin
good song and good recording ….. nice and clean …. enjoy you music my friend
thanks tony. appreciate that.
I love this. The reverence and regret are perfectly balanced, like two colors of the same value that vibrate against each other on a page. I bet when you play it live you see some blank stares from people thinking about their own choices.
this means a lot coming from you, and i like the way you said it: reverence and regret. cool.